Just looking at these, good start!! Which theme is it as the base?

Go with ‘Chinese Medicine’ focus on HOME for first approval.

done

Comments (you may already be doing some of these, I know it’s early comments):

-HOME I’m worried the curved lines will not stack on tablet & mobile sizes. If it doesn't it should just be straight like ‘Protea' or follow the theme blocks more (Meridan?) 

done, made straight

-Colors: Font color looks good! Please introduce one more subtle accent color in the style of ‘Protea' :)

Done, I introduced the copper color from the logo.

-I like the photo backgrounds but pick one ‘theme’ to use throughout. Maybe vary the coloring of the paper to get the same look you have going (variation colors on the different pages but make sure it’s not dated)? The Home ‘paper’ is my fav and I also like the petals but that might be too feminine.

I like the idea of nature shots blurry too and maybe natural textures (like wood, stone, sand, etc)? Did you get into the Adobe Stock account?

I think I’ll use my own Adobe acct. I have an account as it turns out.

-Fonts: from first notes 10/6 she said wanted the fonts from “Clove” theme, please swap out if not terrible, screen attached. The body is close but too ‘character-ish’ for her and she’s picky. Try to match the theme cool styling of the fonts in the demo (mostly larger)

Can you help me understand what you mean in this red part? (This is an example of you not being very descriptive and me having rto wonder what you mean.)

-follow the capitalization in the Text Doc i.e. headline & button on Home s/b all caps. Please change ‘Healing' to ‘Heal'

Done

-footer, make it more like the protea example site: repeat the navigation, abbreviated logo no slogan, address, phone, copyright line. Text not working there, sorry!

-overall, headline fonts and logo should be larger like the themes Meridan or Emmeline demo sites and use the cool buttons they show. Michelle's bio body size looks good. Top Nav, Contact Form body too small (older & possibly disabled people).

-Notes:

Meridan-like color scheme, w/white background 

Clove - fonts 

Emmeline arched photo frames

Thanks!

Lii